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Question: Is this love, lust, or just a poem!?
"Knowing"

Brown eyes,
no disguise,
can't hide!.

Grief,
how we met,
can't offset
the fire!.

Not sure
where we stand,
take my hand!.!.!.

kinesthetics at work!.

Breathe,
just believe,
don't miss
this kiss,
hold the world,

embrace,
can't replace,
don't forget,
won't regret!.

This moment,
own it!.
We met
through tears,
no fears!.

Hold me,
I gave you
a promise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This holds so much to me!. It is part of my feelings in words!. But oh so much more!. I'm not sure if it is to me or not!. For some reason it feels so!. It is love, lust, and so much more to me!. But yet I am afraid so much!. I cry, I hurt, I long inside of my being!. I shall never forgive or forget that night!. There will be "What if's(sp!?)!?" the rest of my life for that night!. I am not sure what will come of anything anymore, but I sit here waiting, wondering, watching on the sidelines as if someone else is living my life and I'm just a spectator!. But as I think about you and our talks and our time so far together I treasure them!. I cling to them tightly as if they are woven all together like my security blanket!. As if they are one of my objects that are so dear and sentimental to me!. I cannot wait till the next time I talk to you, see you, hug you, hold your hand, or just get a big hug from you!. But that is just me being me!. Till next time love!.

By The Lady Blessed BeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it is:

A statement of
What fate meant
After viewing
Eschewing
Renewing
A feeling
Leaves you reeling
Ending
With a mending
Sense of healingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Lots of sizzle-- I think love poem! My favorite part, just love these words,
This moment,
own it!.
Maybe a little lust going on there, but enjoy, Ahhh memories!!! Cheers !!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the rhyming scheme in this, as well as the content!. I vote all 3!Www@QuestionHome@Com

love, lust and a poem!.!.!.well, well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

U can call it the 1st & the 2nd (love of lust), but hard to call it the 3rd!. Nice try!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope it's all three and wrote for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com