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Question: Have you ever wanted to tell the boss how you really feel!?
Piece Of Mine
You run your mouth no matter the cost
I’m supposed to take it cause you’re the boss
What the **** makes you better than me
You’re just too stupid and blind to see
You hide behind your insecurity
Ranting some bullshit noise at me
Did you ever wonder or have a thought pass
That I might decide to kick your ****ing ***
You could have been humble or perhaps even nice
Instead you chose to choose your own device
Throwing slurs and insults degrading crap
Proving to all that you got neither rep nor rap
You’re weak and shallow you ignorant ****
How you made it is just pure dumb luck
I know your type I’ve seen you before
The only thing to do with you is ignore
Don’t take it personal I was just kidding
That’s the reply you’d find to be fitting
Well listen up b**ch cause I’ve got some news
I’ve paid my mother ****ing duesWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You know, it is always kind of hard to read you!.!.!.you are so reserved!. You need to exert yourself more, to really say what's it like!. Now is that some b**ls**t or what! lol Hopefully this was therapuetic!. Maybe Eddie Money will be calling you for a new song!. The words convey quite well here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
LOL!.Yes, well said and written!. Hes lucky your a poet, and that poets tend to fight back with words, whether it be directly or indirectly!. That time you took your frustrations out on your pen and notebook!.
Thanks for sharing and thanks for not beating his ***, or else you might have gotten prosecuted, and we wouldn't been able to get to know you and your poetry!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
I'm not a fan of the naughty words, but I do like it!. I think that writing this out was probably a much better idea than the alternative!.!.!.!.
As for me!.!.!.!.I'm the boss, so I talk nice to myself all the time AND I'm employee of the month!
Take care!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Crude language and full on anger - mad at your boss!?!? Emotions are expressed very well - must have let off a lot of steam - in the writing!. Can only say - if a boss causes this much stress - is the job worth it!?!? If so - then an attitude adjustment is necessary!. Well penned ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
As your boss, here's how I would respond: "You try that rap crap in here again, and I'll bury you in the town dump!. Now STFU and get back to work!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah but not in a friggin poem, more directWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yepp and I did!. I told him F u and to take his job and shove it up his fat a** maybe thas why I got fired!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i told ma boss u stink and **** u hoe dat iz wat i told him and he really stinkWww@QuestionHome@Com
One question, could you have not said this without using all those cuss words--I get your meaning and the anger! I am looking at it from a professional aspect, you may be right on how you feel, say you were in an office of people, even though you may be right and other people would agree with you --to you-- would that be the professional way to handle it!? Not that I don't cuss I do and had a similar situation, and told my boss just how i felt but never used a cuss word-- he was an a--hole but never said that to his face in public at work!
Maybe I am off track and this is just a venting type poem, but still oh well just thought I would make this comment! Cheers !!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it!.
Critique:
I FRIGGIN LOVE IT!. I would so take a line from this poem--hope its not copyrighted--if my boss was a prick:
"You could have been humble or perhaps even nice
Instead you chose to choose your own device"
in my case---it would a be a poor review and no raise!. I would have to tell the co-workers I like to wear bullet proof vests if that ever happened!.!.!.just kidding--LOL
great lyric--enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com