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Question: Can you get out of the chasm !?
Grand Canyon

This hole
Side to side
Miles wide
Hardened stone
Sits alone
Rugged beauty
Sense of duty

Jagged cliffs
Leading
Landing

Rock bottom
Cracked pieces
Strewn about
Echoes shout

No way out
This hole

My heart was!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a powerful poem!. The emotion it conveys transcends the brevity of the words chosen!. There is a way out!. Friends!. Grab my hand!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The hardened heart appears beautiful to outsiders, but they do not realize the true sadness that lies within it its depths or how deep it really goes

I enjoyed it, I have a poem up but I have a sense that I am not wanted or something!.!.Not by you--Just a feeling!. I would love to blame yahoo but I do not think it is the case--Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo! Well done compostion, an extremly rythmical poem! And what's even more importatnt a great poent and extremly vivid vision!.!.!.
Defenitely like it a lot!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great words!. im climbing out of a chasm myself!.!.!.words keep flowing out of me like easy tears!. i really really like this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and a very Grand piece, my friend!. Good to hear you!.
strange, the way out is often the way in!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com