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Question: What's a good title of this poem!?
Hmm!.!. I never titled my poems whatsoever!. Just named them like Secret #1 or Sorrow#8!. Well, stuff like that!. Can you suggest a fitting title for my poem!. I know I'm not a good poet or something!. You can see that, anyway!. So please don't criticize harshly!. It would be great if you can give a title to my siple poem ;)
Love is blind, they say
But love also makes you blind
Strangling the innocent mind
Illusions are what the eyes will see
Losing grip of yourself and reality
A slave to what the heart dictates
Never thinking of what awaits
Doing anything
Doing everything
To make it last forever
In a fairytale world that ends
Happily every after
And never looking back to remember
How many have you killed
How many have you fooled
The precious opportunities wasted
The promises you stated
Forgetting everything else
Even to think of your poor self
All for her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would give the title 'Witchcraft' to this poem!.
I specifically liked this part
"To make it last forever
In a fairytale world that ends
Happily every after"
Good poem though, you can see you've been madly in love but also you're still quite young!. Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Another side of love!?
It seems like you're telling about how most people only see the cute and perfect qualities of love, but really there are people you hurt, and dishonesty!.!.!.those kinds of things too!.
I think either,"Another Side of Love" or "Understanding Love"!.!.!.possibly,"What is Love!?"
Those are good!.
And you are a good poet :) Not everybody can do that!.!.!.
But one thing!.!.!. when you said," In a fairytale world that ends, Happily every after" Was that a typo!? Ever*!?
That sounds better lol!.!.!.
Good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
The strangling of Innocence!.
Lack of reality!.
Fantasy Love!.
I like you poetry, keep writing it or it would be " precious opportunities wasted " !
Good Luck hunni!. X :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
um!.!. probs something like "The Truth of Love" or "The Unspoken Consequences of Love"
but i really like the title "Witchcraft" by the other guy/girl just you might have to change the poem to fit the title just a little bit !.!.!.
anyway goodluck!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like this poem!. It is dark though, but U have what it takes to be a poet!. Just keep on writing and reading!.Post more of Ur poems!.
For a title, THE DARK SIDE OF LOVE or LOVE ILLUSION!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
heres some names:
the blindness of love, ode to love, you have my heart, all for her, etc!. and thats not true!. thats a great poem and youre a great poet!!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Charmed" "Fallen" "Stricken"
"Queen Takes Pawn"
"Love Drunk"Www@QuestionHome@Com
For Love
Listen to my poem, and
comment!. Thank you!.
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=dhL6PcxeJ!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
you could have named this "John's Poem" for your words were what i couldnt write!. Whoever she is, she must be an amazing woman!. maybe the name should just be!.!.!.all for loveWww@QuestionHome@Com
Not Always Happily Ever After
Great poem by the way!Www@QuestionHome@Com
The Road to Love!.!.!. Driven by InsanitiyWww@QuestionHome@Com
in limbo man walking !.!.!.!.!.!.!.instead of dead man walkingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Blind Truth!.
I like how you've formerly named your other poems as well!.
Take care!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
love is valuableWww@QuestionHome@Com
Blind StrangleWww@QuestionHome@Com
Blind Love ~Www@QuestionHome@Com
All For Her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
for love or for her
MAN THIS POEM IS AWSOME REALYWww@QuestionHome@Com