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Question: A poem about my undying love!?
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By Semper Fi Reborn

I've lived with her
For 23 years
I couldn't live without her
For 23 seconds
I wasn't worth 23 cents
When we met
She made me feel like
23 billion dollars
I may not know what life has in store
But I know
Next year's ode will be 24!


Hey, yesterday was our anniversary so I can be corny a bit right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Alright Michael Jordan, we see the love, but billions!? Why not trillions!? lol Happy Anniversary again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now Semper - as punishment you will write 23 times on a blackboard "I share with you the love in my soull"
Nah forget it, we already get THAT message!.

Beautiful!. Congrats on you happiness and may you enjoy it way beyond another 23 years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww, she is very lucky! How adorable and sweet are you!?!!?


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"Hi!",
That is bloody brilliant!.
I loved this poem!.
Nicely done!.!.!.!.

"Happy Anniversary!"
Cheers : )

P!.S: It's nort corney at all!.
She will love it andtotally
' LOVE YOU!' : )

If only my husband would write me something like that!. Sweet and FUNNY!

well done!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awww thats sweet semper, happy anniversary to you both, 23 years is a long time, you two must be very happy, that is a match made in heaven!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Was going to say happy anniversary 23 times --it will take up too much room! Nice to hear that after all those years you still love the person you are with, and so sweet that you have shown us your heart Cheers!!
Happy Happy Anniversary!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Such a love is priceless and inspiring!. Happy anniversary!. You have a way of writing transcendent poems very simply!. I believe it is because you write from the heart!. I appreciate this very much!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

((((((Semper))))))

You know how much I love your beautiful expressions of faith and love!.

Once again, perfection!.

God bless you sweetie!Www@QuestionHome@Com

!Happy Anniversary! :)

and that is a wonderful poem for such a wonderful day !.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful, loving, grateful poem to your beloved!. Methinks you are smitten :-) Happy Anniversary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's precious and not corny at all!. Love like this is never corny!.
Congradulations again and again :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awwwww! Ya big Sweetie!
Again, Happy Anniversary!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope your giving her a copy of your poem!!!!
I think its so sweet and romantic that you can write about your love like this!.Wish my man wrote things for me corny or not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful :)

Again, congratulations!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

A bit corny--maybe, but how corny is it to express how much someone means to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Perfect!.

When it comes to those we love, there is no such thing as corny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Happy anniversary to you both!. You are blessed with this kind of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you couldn't be any more sweet and romantic if you tried!. Do you have a brother!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww!.!.!.that's sweet!. I love the last three lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com