Does this poem suck?

Question: Does this poem suck!?

Once a familiar face
Now intertwined in the crowd
Faith is forever gone
What is now found!?
Loneliness is my home, my sun and my moon
It is all i know
Since the loss of youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is a good one!. The emotions of sadness and loneliness are evident!. Having lost a few people this year that I love and care for, this poem strikes home for me!. Keep up the good work and always write from your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Did you write it!? If so, I think it's good!.!.!.
I like how you don't worry about the rhyming so much!. It's really the flow that's important!.
I think it's a nice beginning!.
If you worked with it more, it could become something very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Poem is fine, and I dont think ur a professional poet so you shouldnt compare yourself to pro's!.!.!. but here's a poem by Gwendolyn Brooks, I personally hate it, but you can form your own opinions

We Real Cool - by G!. Brooks

THE POOL PLAYERS!.
SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL!.

We real cool!. We
Left school!. We

Lurk late!. We
Strike straight!. We

Sing sin!. We
Thin gin!. We

Jazz June!. We
Die soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sad :(

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I'd agree with the first answer, about siz out of ten!. Well, it certainly doesn't suck, it's kind of cool!. It isn't like WOE, that's so DEEP!.but that isn't bad at all, it's nice and flows well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now intertwined in crowds
Since loosing you

i would do it like that
but i love it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wouldn't say it sux but i wasn'e like omg this is the greatest thing ive ever read

but poetry is a very personal thing and i think it is hard for people to judge itWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's very profound and sappy like a maple tree tap putting out it's delicious love syrup!.!.!. FOR MY PANCAKES!Www@QuestionHome@Com

6 or 7/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you have a sense where your going with this!. I only suggest to make it more longer!. Best of Luck!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yea u should work on the end of it and i know that rhyming aint a big thing but u should work on that too!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

kinda odd!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds kinda cheesy, but its well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

XD This is awesome! good work :D

like pixel art!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com