For Siren, who will be greatly missed. A monotetra?

Question: For Siren, who will be greatly missed!. A monotetra!?

I did not know Siren as well as many of you, but she was one of my contacts - and I was deeply shocked to hear of her death!.

Eulogy

How still the site-her journey done!.
Just a Whisper here, since she's gone,
And the brightness with which she shone
For everyone, for everyone!.

Her loss will leave a crater deep
We cannot scale, the walls so steep!.
We simply can her verses reap!.
Don't let them sleep, don't let them sleep!.

We are the shadow people here
Our friends we view, tho' never clear!.
And yet we hold each other dear!.
We shed a tear, we shed a tear!.

When minds and souls find union,
No need for flesh to feast upon
We have blessed communion!.
We'll carry on, just carry on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

A sad event, a beutiful poem!.

This is the part that really resonated with me:

We are the shadow people here
Our friends we view, tho' never clear!.
And yet we hold each other dear!.
We shed a tear, we shed a tear!.

This is so true!. I was saddened by her death, and on some level it felt a little weird to greive for someone I only knew in an online context!. Still, much of who she was came through in her e-mails and poetry!. She had a sweet, engaging way about her!. She will be missed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great Eulogy for her Granny!. It is today i actually come to know of her and her death!. It is sorrowful!.

and the third stanza is really really wonderful!.
"We are the shadow people here
Our friends we view, tho' never clear!.
And yet we hold each other dear!.
We shed a tear, we shed a tear!."

God and me only knows how much I love those shadows here!. They make my family!. My great family of which everyone I admire and adore!.
Love you Granny!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I remember how much she spoke of you!.!.!.thrilled whenever you gave words of praise and or critique!. She was thrilled when you connected to her, I'll never forget the happiness in her voice!.

Thank you for writing this, for carrying her voice still!. We will carry on, shed tears, but her words will never sleep!. Thank you so much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Grannyjill speaks for me!. I tried to write something but words stalled!. I know Sptfyr has also written a wonderful tribute elsewhere!.

I was greatful to Siren adding me as a contact in her last few days!. Her 2 series on "Crimson" and the unfinished "Gun kisses" were mini masterpieces of suspense and storytelling craft!.

Her story ended
but her history echoes
in our hearts and minds!.
RIPWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is a terrible loss we are suffering, she was a very talented poet and a very sweet person who had a thirst for learning and bettering her work!. I keep thinking about the question she posted only a few weeks ago about her pain!. She is pain free now!. This is a beautiful monotetra for Siren!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And an added Blessed Amen!. We are her "shadow" family who cared for her from afar!. To meet and grow fond of a "virtual" person is done - only to find out - that we eventually feel as one!. Siren - you are real and will always remain so - in our hearts ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

very very nice Granny!.
youve said some real things here!.

i think she was pretty cool!.
this is all sinking in slow to me!.
cuz i just dont really like it!.!.
Her lucifer poem had a rhythm to it
unlike some recent things i read!.
i feel she always wanted something,
was going after it!.!.!. thats a good thing i thought!.
so what happened!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Although I didn't know her well, as many of us can say! She was a sweet lady, that always replied in a honorable way! Remember her we all will, miss her too! Thank you for the Eulogy, and bless you!!
Cheers always she remains --in her poetry and our hearts!! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can't recall who said that friends are the family we choose!.
I cannot believe I have been here with you for only 5 weeks!.
You are so important to me now!. I wanted you all to know that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a beautiful tribute, one that I'm sure would touch her dearly!. The whole poem is fabulous, but that third stanza is a masterpiece of pure poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am captivated by the smooth lines and soft curves of your words; a moving portrait of a flickering shadow now gone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful tribute to Siren, granny!. I LOVE the third stanza too!
Even though she wasn't one of my contacts I feel a collective sense of loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is superb!. "And yet we hold each other dear!.!.!."

I feel real affection for many members of my virtual family!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sadly, I did not have the pleasure of this lady!.
I Was not even aware of her Death!
Your Poem shows,How Loved she was,
For that I say,

God Bless!
!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really wonderful!. I can feel the emotion, though I don't know the person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We are the shadow people, how true!. Beautiful tribute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful tribute to a beautiful soul!. Her voice sings through you!.!.!.magnificent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
That was beautiful!. Unfortunately I never got to know her!.
I am sure she was a really nice lady!. It's really nice to see a lot of people cared, Even If she was only known through Cyber land, I'm sure her essence was embedded deep within her poetry's!.

You have done a great job on this Eulogy in monotetra which I know now, Isn't that easy!.

And all seems to be done perfectly!. Although I question the sound effects with the first verse, (done,gone,shone,everyone) only because I know all last 3 letters has (o-n-e) but don't have the rhyme tone, If you know what I mean!. But I am not shore how that works/rules in monotetra!.

But other than that Perfect!. All has consistency of 8 Syllables and all but 1st verse rhyme fluently!.
I quite enjoyed it!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )
P!.S: Thx for checking mine out too day! : )Www@QuestionHome@Com