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Question: Can you reach in and grab them!?
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IN THE CAVERN, IN THE CAVERN

As the torchbearer passed,
the light
burned entoptic images into my eye!.

Monochromatic lines,
there,
on my mind,
in my eye!.

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and there is godWww@QuestionHome@Com

"In the cavern, In the cavern
little light of wisdom burns,
A single chrome, and that it is
To million jubilant spectrum turns"Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
It's call hallucination!. Cause of effect!. A good Night out! : )

Disappear for a day come back firing don't you!.

A nother good little poem!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

An afterimage!? But monochromatic!? How is this possible!? Where are the other colors on the paletter!? And which color!? This is all very mysterious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, Not I !.!.
The images are far too intangible touch!.
They shall remain in your eye and on your mind
In the cavern of shadows and light!.
Until stronger than I comes to your assistance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's those Rods and Cohens again!. It's not every day that I get to see "entoptic" in a poem!. But I have always admired your vision!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Floaters, floaters everywhere!.
the vision remains very clear, however!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

EllipsoidWww@QuestionHome@Com

I hate those little blue dots!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

your third eyeWww@QuestionHome@Com