I found it impressive
In lust it was regressive
I found it suggestive
In love it was progressive
It was impresses
That I found in the interests
Of soul
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In lust it was regressive I found it suggestive In love it was progressive It was impresses That I found in the interests Of soul And moreWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ooo i like it, try putting spicyer words in it if u can and not every last word has to be rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com I sorry, but I hate it!. It seems like your main focus was on forcing most of it to rhyme, and then you just said "whatever" for the rest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Is this serious!? If so then you need to rework it!. Your Rhymes sound forced and some of your lines don't make sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |