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Question: I wrote a new poem!?
I found it impressive
In lust it was regressive
I found it suggestive
In love it was progressive
It was impresses
That I found in the interests
Of soul
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ooo i like it,
try putting spicyer words in it if u can

and not every last word has to be rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I sorry, but I hate it!. It seems like your main focus was on forcing most of it to rhyme, and then you just said "whatever" for the rest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is this serious!? If so then you need to rework it!. Your Rhymes sound forced and some of your lines don't make sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com