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Question: Misdirected thinking!.!.!.!.!.!.!.a poem, care to comment!?
From the Vault!.!.!.!.

Head North (memories are made of this)
By Jellz Fisher circa Dec 1995

The sudden thought gazed around,
into unfamiliar territory,
and knew it was lost!.
But having consulted another idea
the suggestion argued
that logic should
shinny up a power pole
to take a look!.
Using all available information
(And it's handy pocket all-purpose guide map)
it re-convened the meeting with the rest,
but arbitrarily decided to agree with instinct
and to forge ahead regardless!.

Direction maintained,
through mass confusion and doubt,
it rallied enough common sense
to observe the road rules,
and having come
to another contentious intersection
(In the middle of no-where),
it gave way to through traffic,
and to the right,
and finally found the on-ramp
that it knew would eventually lead north!.
"I knew I was right" declared the thought!.

Sometimes it takes a little longer to get there,
but it does in the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
And they say men are bad at directions! lol A funny read with much truth!. Stay away from the power poles!. Sometimes they might make you grounded!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Marvellous! Puts me in mind of Tom Waits' Emotional Weather Report!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank heavens for the GPS!. I used to get lost going around the block!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's beautiful:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wanna borrow the GPS!. It will talk with a Brit accent, but not Aussie!.!.!.I should ask for my money back!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hello!. All i can say is love it!. Take care!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com