2 poems i had wrote?

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its 2 poems just wondering what u would thik of them

I think of you each morning
And dream of you each night
I think of you being in my arms
Kissin u on the neck
Then passionately kiss ur pretty pink lips
Feel so soft an oh so right
Your gentle touch
Makes everything right
An I just wanna spend all night
With u in my arms
Till the sun comes up

the rain trickles down
thoughts run through
im here thinkin of how to get to you
inside my chest my heart is breaking
I'm missing you so much
just want u to knoe how i feel
these feelings so strong and oh so true
how i like to be laying under the stars
my arms wrapped around you
kiss you softly
feel your gentle touch
there no were else i want to be
expect laying underneath the stars with you babeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Well they are both so sweet
The first one is indeed of love
as well as reassurance
letting her know you think of her
and then you dream of her
Oh I am sure she will love this
having these feelings makes you feel right
The last two lines I am assuming you can and will
hold her till the sun comes up!.

Warm thoughts come when the rain trickles down
some sadness here because she is not there
and having this feeling breaks your heart
and you are missing her too!.
Does she know about these poems!.
I think you should read them to her
they both send a clear message
you will feel better and so will she!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you trying to get a girl!? Because if you are, then i think you might want to use something else!. Although the second one could pass!. the first one would make her think that you were really weird!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love poems, with nature!.!.!. rain trickling down!.!.!.Feelings so strong and oh so true!.!.!.
Yes I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com