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Question: Rate My Poem!!?
1-10 tell me what u think of my poem!

I acted mean
I acted deep
And In the act
U followed me

I wanted 2 know
What u would think
If i died
in my sleep

I kinda didn't
want to know
I didn't really
Let it show

But u had
read my mind
And followed me
one last time

I could here you
I could see
All that u
had to scream

A cry for help
A cry of pain
a cry to know
You went insane

You killed yourself
In suicide
With no love
And with no prideWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that's amazing!.!. you wrote a really good poem!.!. definitely keep writing!.!. this poem deeply expresses your thoughts on someone who died!.!. its insanely good!.!. great job!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.

It really sounds like it'd be a great song! (Thinking Blue Octber-ish)

Sounds painful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10
it was beautiful, was it written about somebody!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It needs some work and you need to spell out the words and numbers--Some of the sentences do not flow as they should--

6Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful :]

Star

- Jordan SkyWww@QuestionHome@Com

8 prtty interstingWww@QuestionHome@Com

not gonna lie i dont really like it!. brush up on the vocab!. use bigger words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10Www@QuestionHome@Com

good but substitute too for 2Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm !.
ilike !.
but just a little tip !


poems dont have to ryme !.
:]]

but its good other than that !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

make it rhyme more and less insane and it might be better 6/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

i loved it! ur really talented! 10! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com