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Question: Rate My Poem!!?
1-10 tell me what u think of my poem!
I acted mean
I acted deep
And In the act
U followed me
I wanted 2 know
What u would think
If i died
in my sleep
I kinda didn't
want to know
I didn't really
Let it show
But u had
read my mind
And followed me
one last time
I could here you
I could see
All that u
had to scream
A cry for help
A cry of pain
a cry to know
You went insane
You killed yourself
In suicide
With no love
And with no prideWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that's amazing!.!. you wrote a really good poem!.!. definitely keep writing!.!. this poem deeply expresses your thoughts on someone who died!.!. its insanely good!.!. great job!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
9!.
It really sounds like it'd be a great song! (Thinking Blue Octber-ish)
Sounds painful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
10
it was beautiful, was it written about somebody!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
It needs some work and you need to spell out the words and numbers--Some of the sentences do not flow as they should--
6Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful :]
Star
- Jordan SkyWww@QuestionHome@Com
8 prtty interstingWww@QuestionHome@Com
not gonna lie i dont really like it!. brush up on the vocab!. use bigger words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
10Www@QuestionHome@Com
good but substitute too for 2Www@QuestionHome@Com
hmm !.
ilike !.
but just a little tip !
poems dont have to ryme !.
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but its good other than that !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
make it rhyme more and less insane and it might be better 6/10Www@QuestionHome@Com
i loved it! ur really talented! 10! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com