Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Mr. Sun Corrected?


Question: Mr!. Sun Corrected!?
Mr Sun

Outside today
We go to play
The sun is out
There is no doubt

Shining bright
It give out light!.
Sunglasses on
Sunlight shown,

Clouds passing by
Is the sun in the sky!?
Is it playing hid-n-seek!?
Or coming out to peek!?

Mr!. Sun where are you!.
I can see the sky so blue!.
What's that peeking out
Now I see the sun all about!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's still a very good poem!.!.!.Didn't know you enjoy poetry!?!.So do I!.!.!.!.!.!.Blessings!.Blessings YahooWww@QuestionHome@Com