Visuals for the poem "Road To NoWhere" ; critique please?

Question: Visuals for the poem "Road To NoWhere" ; critique please!?

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Rhona Jane has a great voice - and the music works beautifully with the film!. Excellent tempo!. The visual impact of the road just going on and on fits with the theme, but lacks something - I can't think what!.

Just one comment - I don't agree that life is a road that leads us to nowhere! I think that after this life we take off (get airborne, if you like) so I'm in accord with the sentiment that there is no need to dread our passing away!.

Perhaps a closing shot where the camera rises up from the road to focus on the clouds above, just to lift the ending!?Www@QuestionHome@Com