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Question: Haha, really awful poem about a pub!?
Sit back
Have a beer

Forget your troubles
Come over here

The pub at the edge
Of town, this town

Take a shot
Slug your lager down

Girls tap their feet
A high old time

Feet move faster
Dance floor prime

Foam sloshes over
Glasses spill

Can you say!.!.!.
Hangover thrill!?

The band plays
Loud, loud, louder

Little man on a fiddle
Short, but stouter

For a bluesy harmonica
The lights begin to dim

And the din quiets
Chance of sound, slim

And the harmonica lilts
And the notes singe their hearts

Raw emotion pours
And strikes them like dartsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I liked it well and at the end your little twist about the playing darts!!! Good job!!! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ha! I like that! Funny, and good rhymes!. It's really not awful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ha its funny!. its bot bad at all really!. love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wait I know!!!!! Its about a pub!.!.!.OMG OMGWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol not badWww@QuestionHome@Com