Do you like my love song?

Question: Do you like my love song!?

LUCY
Lucy I love you
With my whole heart
Lucy I loved you
From the very start

A crush I had on you
Heart felt letter
Said I love you
Its now or never

Lucy I waited
It was so hard
Lucy I waited
Now your standing in my front yard

The rush I got from looking at you
Heart felt E-mail I sent to you
said Have you heard the news
I's In love with U's

Lucy I've watched you
held on strong
Lucy I've watched you
Thought you were gone

Yesterday I got a letter
From my mail box
said remember me golden hair
remember first grade, truth or dare

I replied with a simple yea
I was shocked
cause Lucy I'd never forget you
cause Lucy oh Lucy I love you

And Lucy
I wish to marry youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

NopeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Now that's good musical writing/poetry!. Nice job!.!.!.okay, I lied!. I don't hate it, but I don't love it either, but still, it's not like it's terrible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lmao i can't argue with your sentiment!. But this poem is terrible! it is terrible in all aspects of poetry!.!.!.!.yet it has emotion and longing, that is something i can't deny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh!.!. My!.!.Gosh!
If you say "Lucy" one more time I think I'm going to flip lol
Repetition is not always the key hun but I see where you're coming from and you get 2 out of 5 pretty Gold stars for trying!! :o)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! I also like the name Lucy!. Where's the music so you can have a #1 hit on your hands like, "Hey there Delilah!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

um its a better peom than a song but that was a good tryWww@QuestionHome@Com

NO, toooooooo mushy gushy, and freakishly obbessive!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

did u have 2 use Lucy!?
like i Love Lucy
Everybody Loves Raymond lol
its good but it could be more originalWww@QuestionHome@Com

umm its not that good, sorry!. the structure of it wasn't really consistent!. you'll do better next time though!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's beautiful!. You are a very sweet guy and Lucy is a very lucky girl to have someone who honestly cares about her !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lucy is a lucky woman!.!.!.!.!.!.Lucky to be away from you!. I'm not impress!. It sounds like your starking Lucy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bootiful, I'm sure your boyfriend will love it!.
I'm just yanking your dick, it's pretty good mate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think to many lines ryme, but it is the thought that counts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it's great, I think Lucy will love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. it sounds so good and professional its kinda hard to belive it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

how sweet good luck!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

is it called "I Love Lucy"!? anyway, i don't really like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not bad but needs a couple touchups!. Goodluck :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it would make a better poem but anywho good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

awww!.!. this is sweet!.
wish someone would write something like this for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWWWW! SO SWEET! is this 4 ur gf!? hope soWww@QuestionHome@Com

Uh!.!.!. who's Lucy!?Www@QuestionHome@Com