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Question: A song for a sweet Siren!.!.!.Is it fitting!?
An Angle's Taken Flight (a monotetra)

An earthbound Angel's taken flight
to join the stars that twinkle bright
and sing her Siren song by night
Look to the light, look to the light!.

No longer will our Siren sing!.
An earthbound Angel's taken wing
and in her flight did sadness bring
a painful sting, a painful sting!.

In memory; her voice so frail
sings to the wind, a lovely tale!.
An earthbound Angel's taken sail
on heaven's gale, on heaven's gale!.

She sings of friends with heavy heart
with knowledge that we all must part!.
Through loving words she did depart
her soulful art, her soulful art!.

Criteria for the monotetra:
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I can't thank you enough!. This is so beautiful, and fitting!. She would be so pleased to know that though she can no longer sing, we will all take up her voice!. Blessed Be, and peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very interesting (and tempting to emulate)!. I bet you have to take a lot of care in choosing which rhyme sound you need for each of the verses!.
Having read the criteria - there doesn't seem to be any ruling in regard to the repetition of lines, which you have introduced!.!.!.!.you'll have to call it a monotetraspyt!!!!
"An earthbound Angel's taken!.!.!.!.!.!.!." X 3
Congratulations on your successful song
(Angle!? Angle!? !.!.!.!.)
Any way - I'm going to go away and try this!.!.!.I love a challenge
Edit - I didn't know about Siren!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you for that great tribute to Siren - I was so shocked to hear of her passing!. I will surely miss her and her daily installments of her current story series!. She did say that she wanted to take a break from them - and only write independent poems for awhile!. I will miss her greatly!. Really sad thing is - we have lost two poets in as many months - Dark Prince in June - Siren in July!. Take care and God bless all!. Namaste ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, it's very good!. I can tell you put alot of excellent work in your song!. And it shows it paid off!. Great job and dont give up your writting!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was a melodious song!.!.!.!.very musical and touching!.!.!.I like it so much!.!.!.
and thanks for teaching what monotetra is!.!.!.it is really a great way of writing lyrics!.!.!.!.!.and i think it fits well for elegies!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful, beautiful song!
I feel cheated at not having had the chance to know this lovely soul!. May God Bless and keep her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is lovely, i think i am going to have to try me one of those!.
Thank you for the inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was a very beautiful tribute to Siren Reborn!. Another
Angel gone to Heaven !. I will look forward to meeting her when It Is my turn!. Bye for now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am sitting here crying at the death of the Siren and at your magnificent tribute to her!.

You are brilliant!. I admire you very much and feel much sorrow at Siren's death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful Poem!. I'm still too upset about it to write anything in her memory--maybe tonight!.

She seemed to be a very sweet, unassuming person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is a Beautiful Tribute to Siren I have read only a couple of Siren's poems And I did enjoy them!.!.!.!. It is a sad day For She will be missed As well as Her Poems!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Again A Wonderful Tribute!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.God BlessWww@QuestionHome@Com

this is beautiful bravoWww@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi, that is Awesome!',
I admire your work!

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very fitting!. This is beautiful!. I knew her in person, though not on Answers, she would thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well said!. AmenWww@QuestionHome@Com