Haikus myself......a poem, care to comment?

Question: Haikus myself!.!.!.!.!.!.a poem, care to comment!?

Haikus myself (je m'haikus), comprenez!?
(The story, so far!.!.!.!.)
by Jellz Fisher 080724

Swinging on the moon
Phases of me in fullness
Gives a wrong impression

Gets really lonely
Taking passengers next time
“Riders on the sky”

Will try to vary
Taking orbit less traveled
Might find a sky fork!!

"Come fly with Jellz Air”
“To Air is human”, forgive!?
…another storyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I know!.!.!.!.!.!.it's only Jelku's, but I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm!.!.!.not very clear, as haiku chains go!.

More, a stream of consiousness mediation on the moon amounting to confusion at best!.

The haiku form is a bastardized 5-7-5 that really attains nothing that the traditional haiku is supposed to attain!. Haiku is much more than 5-7-5!. Research the proper use of the haiku and then attempt the form/poem again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi Jellz!",
Good morning, your an Earlie bird riser!. I'm only up this Earlie because I haven't been asleep!.
Its cold too!. I hope you have your heater and mitten's on!.
You must be like my husband, love the winter season!.
I prefer to roast in the sun and turn into roast beef!.

I love your Haiku story!. I'm going to have to try it myself!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really good, I like it but maybe it's not that clear what you are saying!.!.!.!.!. a bit hard to understand for me!.
plz answer my poem:
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wonder if we could call these Con-verbial j'Haikus or Perverbial j'Haikus!.

They are very funny, as always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com