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Question: Con-verb's and other odd poems!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Care to comment!?
Some different ideas and formats using words (of all things!?!)

Because it's there

She tried to
scale a hill
but a lass,
to know a vale!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.eventually did!.

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Life Lessens (just playing with form here Ls & Ps and ABBCCs)

Life in paradox
Lost, forever, one of, pair of sox
Late, one time, laid out in pine box
Lying, waiting patiently for release
Left, eternally, in one!.!.!.peace

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"What is this life, if full of care!.!.!.!."

In my game of life!.!.!.
everyone's a winner!.

In my way of religion,
no-one’s a sinner!.

In my race,
start 2 steps ahead,
so no-one’s a beginner!.

In my bathroom mirror,
everyone looks thinner!.

In my…!.
no name,
instant fame,
not to blame,
all the same,
no shame……Life

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The mirror should reflect
only the soul
anything else!.!.!.!.
vanity!

Confucious says he who gets "peace" while lying on Earth gets everlasting "piece" with Earth! Good ones here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Congratulations, you look beautiful in orange!. Come over, we'll we'll do tea or tequila (your choice)!
Oh, great poem, I like your life!
Your first converb is such a convoluted delight I printing it out if it's OK with you!.
Well Done!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

"What is this life, If full of care" is a wonderful poem!. Great ending, and the lines about the bathroom mirror are inspired!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The mirror is for hair fixing only!. Anything below the forehead, forget about it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the way you look under everything!.
leave no orange scarf unturned!Www@QuestionHome@Com

fame is lame
all the same
here today
gone tomorrow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Congratulations! The orange scarf means you are paying too much time to YA!. I took a "vacation" (for a day) - when I got back - my scarf was gone!. It comes and goes ?Www@QuestionHome@Com