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Question: Post Script to the World!.!.!.!.!?
It seems as if life!.!.
Has turned it's back on us at times
One man struggels to make a stand
Another one falls!.!.!.!.
It's sad when no ones there!.!.!.

I've seen good men turn
To evil ways!.!.!.!.!.
But very few return
Tention builds!.!.!.!.or breaks
No one seems to care

Some trudge through life
With both eyes closed!.!.!.!.
Afraid to face the sun
Yet there are some!.!.!.
The really lucky ones!.!.!.
Who reach out with hope!.!.!.
And love some one!.

With Love!.!.!.!.!.VitrauxWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A very nice sentiment, said well!. Spell checker would help!. You could try this if you think it is too patronizing "with myopic eyes,"Www@QuestionHome@Com

some people do fall by the way side, i have lost friends to drugs and drink, i like most of your poem, the one line i don't like is, some trudge through life with both eyes cloesd, it's kind of patronising!.Www@QuestionHome@Com