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by C!.S!. Scotkin Before you arrive you speak of leaving!. Time, my enemy; four days or five not enough!. Space, my other foe!. Too much between then and now!. I box my wristwatch before I meet your plane!. Time stops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is really a great idea for a poem!. I absolutely love your first two lines (excellent ones to build a poem out of)!. This is such a clever message of waiting for someone and your sense of time and distance growing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yep, I certainly do!. I can't write poems like this, but I love to read them!. (a tiny question!.!.!.in US to box something is to put it in a box, yes!? - just asking!. In UK we say we are going to box your ears or "What do you do!?" question to a pugilist 'I box' so it did seem a strange choice of words)Www@QuestionHome@Com This is tight, poignant!. The final Trochee is like a punch in the heart!. Everyone has had that moment when time seems to come to a stop when we are waiting for a conclusion to a situation!. I like this very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a very clever poem!. I like the concept of putting time in a box and living in the now!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com He's home! I had to read it twice and I am glad I did!. I missed the connection first time!. I wasn't sure what "box my wristwatch" meant then it came to me!. This is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!", I love space poems!. My favourit verse is the last one!. I box my wristwatch before I meet your plane!. WELL DONE! Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com Yeah, I like it!. Short, sweet, to the point, and every word is spelled out!. Thank you!. In fact, I believe that I've fallen in love with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Starting to stop Stopping to start Time on a dime A dime for some !.!.!.more time! Nice play with the words and much meaning behind!. It's a good one!Www@QuestionHome@Com :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Very good! Lots of space and time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Time flews never wait whenever youre old or young its just leaves you behind ! (nice poem do you like my verse !?)Www@QuestionHome@Com Its cool!! I like it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com not reallyWww@QuestionHome@Com no but i dont likr poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com |