What do you think of my love poem?! please rate =] and comment?

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Question:

I want to get to know you like!.!.

the way you move when you dance to a music
the number of sips you take to drink your latte
the seasoning you used for your lunch today
or how fast you drive when your mad
what joke makes you laugh
or what you draw when your bored in class
i want to get to know you like
how many stars you want in the sky
what pillow makes you sleep better at night
How loud you have to shout when you have to fight
the number to tissues you need when you have to cry
I want to get to know you like this tonight

Thank you please tell me what you think and if there is ways to improve it =] ThanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i don't think u have to improve it!.!.!.!.!.!.!. i like it just the way it is!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I want to get to know you like
I would say
I want to get to know you ( for example)
The way you move when dancing to muic
what do you like to drink
what you eat for lunch
your mood when driving
What makes you laugh, cry
I just want to get acquainted with you!.
I would start slowlyWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like the idea behind the poem, but the poem itself makes you sound like a stalker, you should check out some poerty sites and read as much poerty as you can!. 3/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com