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Question: These series poems are fun!. Invented by Eva, I think!. Am I staying on course!?
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Every jungle has a particular smell!.
This one is cedar and vanilla!.
Half of the bushes ooze a scented ointment
with each chop from the machetes!.

TD and Dondi stop to rest their packs,
They can see Neon and Jay up ahead,
hacking and pulling at the green wall!.

As they pause, Dondi begins to reflect
on the journey…

“When we were younger men
and time was a Magazine, we
moved without plans!. Now, we
wait and watch and worry well…”

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Did you really see Jay
Hacking his way
Through the shrubbery!?
That's such good news
(Yes, I can hear the sound
of a tinkling Silver bell)
I'm so happy that all is well!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
or is it just the light
playing tricks
with an old man's sight!?
Or wishful thinking!?
(or too much drinking!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Then what's going to happen next!? the smell of the jungle is carried by the winds and probably a song from TD and Dondi!.!.!.Neon and Jay should continue!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Keep hacking through that jungle!. Eventually, you will find a clearing -- I hope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

'wells', should not be about worry, but hope & reasons 4 laughter!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You ol-!.!.!.!.I mean you MATURE fellows better be careful out there!

Yes, they are fun, aren't they!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

And up ahead Jay and Neon could hear these words and they smiled!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

jungle philosophers, watch out for those trees!Www@QuestionHome@Com

"!.!.!.and time was a Magazine!.!.!." :) Sounds like a nice smelling jungle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com