How's this for a love poem? Any comments?

Question: How's this for a love poem!? Any comments!?

Love

As faithfully as the sight of
stars and moonlight,
I have seen myself
reflected in your eyes,
surrounded by the love behind them;
held precious in the worlds in your heart!.
A universe displayed in one look
one touch, a feeling unmatched;
knowing the eternal breathes
life into me when you are near!.
For all time, it will ever be
an unspoken reality;
kindred souls
to last through eternity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is quite lovely and inspiring!. The image of being reflected in your lover's eyes "surrounded by the love behind them" is very beautiful!. I also love the lines "knowing the eternal breathes!.!.!. life into me when you are near"!. They are the epitome of words of love!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love:
This is a beautiful poem
I like how it talks about the stars
and moonlight!.
The moonlight can be romantic for
a couple to spend to together
The stars would be dancing up in
the sky!.
I would think of this like romance
for the reasons I said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG that is so cute! anyone you tell that to will be like zapped under a love spell!. my only comment is that the line "held precious in the worlds in your heart" is kind of awkward because its longer than the rest!. That would make a really sweet song and each little part could be a verse and the first four lines could be the chorus!. That is soooo sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is so beautiful!. its so touching!. when i read the first two lines, i was like wow!. my favorite lines are the few lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats like 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a great love poem!. I love the whole poem but the last four lines are my favorite, they're beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
WOW, that was a splendid love poem!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers: )Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's real good for a love poem!. If you give it to someone I'll bet
they will blush for a week!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww!.!.!.
i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com