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Question: "Poem" Would you add a verse of your own!?
Could you add on and shape what
is to come for the person in this
poem!?=)

Once in to the eyes of fate I did see,
in those murky depths it was made clear to me,
the day soon would be at hand
when I would take
my first and final brave stand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Once in to the eyes of fate I did see,
in those murky depths it was made clear to me,
the day soon would be at hand
when I would take
my first and final brave stand
As the sun rises from far east
A young warrior awakens to his reality
Fear would be his only enemy
One battle does not a war make
no longer a boy forever a manWww@QuestionHome@Com

I stood upon this Highlanders hill
Sighting Culloden's green land
Imagining the screems and shrills
Of those brave men
And their fighting clansWww@QuestionHome@Com

I walked many miles,
Now I approach the end,
I want to thank you,
For being my best friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com