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Question: Seasons, what do you think!?
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Summer strolls
Among the sprouting corn stalks
Of Mother Earth's farm,
As the Father Sun
Reaps the soil dry!.
Summer swoons in warm
Mid-day showers!.
And she sings for
The ocean birds,
Soaring in circles
In the timeless gloom
Of the monster of the sky!.
Summer sits with
The spider webs,
Shaded beneath an aging oak!.
She is the prided maiden!.

Fall flies among
The falling colors of
Mother Earth's canvass
As Father Sun hides
Behind the breeze!.
Fall feasts with
The full Harvest Moon!.
And he forages among
Frightful field mice;
Trapped forever within
The huge maw of a forest!.
Fall frees the world from
Worrisome fears,
He is a heroic father!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it is really good!. I like, "Summer sits with the spider webs, shaded beneath an aging oak!. She is the prided maiden!." That's my favorite part!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it seems to be anever ending seasonal poem pl make it short and brief!. hope i do help/
upon the pedestal of time ,
rest all saesons a nd life,
upon all events of seasons,
lies the truth the reality ,
that nothing is permanent ,
no no life nor death nor seaon ,
least above all is lifes reasonWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like all the personification given to things!. I think you did good!. I can actually picture this in my mind!. It is a very descriptive poem!. Great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful! I just didn't like to comparison of the sky to a monster!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The 4 seasons is good, but I prefer the Temptations better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trite and cliched!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I personally think that it is quite longWww@QuestionHome@Com