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Question: "Reality" Just a poem, comments please!?
Where is the place,
my head should lay
for
soul to weep
heart to break,
as I must face reality,
from
day to day
year to year,
as all I've known
disappears,
swept away-as if
what was
did not exsist!.
Reality
where is the place
I try to touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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i think that poem is related in your life!.!.!.!.
it good!.!.!.!. try to make moreWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.
I am at that point in life now!. Every month or two, someone I love leaves us!. My Mom will be 86 in November!. I have 3 living aunts and 2 living uncles (I started with 14) and my little sister turns 50 next year!. This is the time when all I can do is hold hands, so that is what I do!. My Father-in-Law passed away on the 4th of July!. He wanted me to take him outside so he could feel the sun on his face one more time!. The nurses and all would not let me move him!. So I held his hand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is not "just" a poem!. It is a poem!. Jenny, give your poems titles from now on!. Makes them easier to track!.

I am sorry for your friend and for her terrible, tragic loss at such a time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Given the footnote, it makes this even more poignant!. A simple sentiment, said simply, can be as profound as layers of esoterica!. This is said well!. I am sorry for your friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem is filled with great sadness and despair!. I am sorry for your friend!. This poem is very real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blessings to your friend in a time of sorrow you express well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry for your friend's loss!. I hope this poem touches her if she reads it!. Lovely poem, Jenny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sorry for your friend!. It is a good poem, really!. Keep it up and write more amazing ones!.Www@QuestionHome@Com