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Question: What do you think of this piece of writing!? (poem, idk)!?
i just wrote this and i don't really know if it's any good or not!. i would really love some HONEST opinions!. do you guys understand this!? does it sound good!? does it suck!? thank you so much for your help!.

btw here click this link,
the whole thing couldn't fit on yahoo!answers!.

http://img71!.imageshack!.us/img71/3446/14!.!.!.

does it even make sense!?
give me your HONEST opinions,
thank you veryyyy much!. i appreciate it!.


btw there were 2 typos,
-towards the end the "trasing" should be "thrashing"
- from "maybe i only feel this way" to "maybe only i feel this way!."Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that was really good!. it made perfect sense!. sometimes you have to read a poem multiple times to understand it but i got it the first time i read it!. i loved it!. you are a good writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i LOVEEEEEE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhh its sooo goodd!!!!!!!!!
keep writing idk why but i reallyyyy like it!.!.lol!!!!!
answerr mine please!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!. that is completlyy amazing!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com