Is this a no good poem?

Question: Is this a no good poem!?

came with out a word
created my whole world
shine my day with smile
kiss my night goodbye

ever since don’t want to go
without you i have no glow
but all is well, its for you
bear this hitch with out an itch

distant but wont be lost
but hey I wont lurk
create my dream as you my wish
thanks to you, it will be realWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

the meter seems all off and the whole thing seem kind on cliche!. Its not horrible it has potential!. Try matching syllables from line to line!. Read your poem out load and see if you can fix some of the flow issues!. overall not bad, fix this one up and keep writing and also keep reading other peoples poems to get some inspiration!.!.!.good work though, at least your trying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Take notice of what Mike has said for there is good advice in his words!. Remember also, there is no such thing as "A no good poem"!. All poetry can be adjusted to suit the reader, even if the interpretation of the poem is misunderstood!.

If you like it, that is the end of the matter!. What we say is is only what you have requested!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

It has promise but the flow is all over the place!. also the way you are wording some of the sentences is not rightWww@QuestionHome@Com