Hope by Tia Metcher
Suns luminous rays,
Absorbs the oceans tears,
Rainbow signifies happiness,
Departing the clouded fears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Suns luminous rays, Absorbs the oceans tears, Rainbow signifies happiness, Departing the clouded fears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love it! Truely unique!. How do you like my new avatar pic!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Absorbs the ocean's tears!? Tears flowing upwards!? Interesting!. Suns mighty rays mixing with ocean blue forming rainbows from departing clouds happiness from fearWww@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.!.!.!.!.but why not add two more stanzas to make it a great poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com yep its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com It is nice!. I like it!. Is it all or are you gonna continue!? If so good beginning, if not interesting short poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |