What do yo think of my little poem of Hope?

Question: What do yo think of my little poem of Hope!?

Hope by Tia Metcher

Suns luminous rays,
Absorbs the oceans tears,
Rainbow signifies happiness,
Departing the clouded fears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I love it! Truely unique!. How do you like my new avatar pic!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absorbs the ocean's tears!? Tears flowing upwards!? Interesting!.

Suns mighty rays
mixing with ocean blue
forming rainbows
from departing clouds
happiness from fearWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.!.!.but why not add two more stanzas to make it a great poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

yep its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is nice!. I like it!. Is it all or are you gonna continue!? If so good beginning, if not interesting short poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com