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Question: It's me again guys,please rate my second poem!.!?
I don't know how i got here
but i feel engulfed within this road
slowly does it grow,the feeling of fear
and torment i carry as my load

i scream at the top of my lungs
awaiting for help from a good soul to come
but instead they pass me by like dilly-dongs
self-absorbed shadows,carrying out the usual norm

as i hear the strange footsteps near me
i weep of loneliness and fear i can't bear
suddenly,a sweet voice with such beauty i can't see
he says to me,"do not be afraid,i am here"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The Good Samaritan,Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty nice, keep on writing Cheers !!Www@QuestionHome@Com