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Question: Wasted Day Poem!?
So much pain bottled up inside
Does no one see the tears I've cried
Day in and out it's all the same
Makes me want to go insane
All this pain there is no end
Sometimes I wish that I was dead
People talk about me all the time
I can hear what they say, by me it's fine
Self esteem lost long ago
When people chose to give up hope
No use for her, she's just a joke
Life on a leash, heart on a rope
Trapped in her house all day long
Only way to escape is through a song
She tries so hard to just fit in
But the other girls are just too thin
She doesn't want to be like them
She just wants to have some friends
Someone to talk to when she wants to give up
When life gets tough and she's had enough
Someone to care about her all the time
She doesn't get that from family, that's not a lie
Hearts left broken shattered and bruised
Who's to blame, I'll give you a clue
Her ex-boyfriend, her family, including friends too
Who said they'd be there to help her get through
But no ones there and no one caresWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I hope your life goes sh*t again if it means you can write good emotional poetry like this!. Very good effort!.
I guess people need to experiance real pain and sorrow to let out such feelings in poetry form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed it, but my one recommendation would be to separate it into stanzas- it would be so much easier on the eyes!.

^^ I'm glad to hear that you're feeling better, now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com