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Question: A Poem: "Jail Bird" what is your feedback!?
This ring weighs heavy upon my chest and I cannot fly away!.
It takes me captive once again and grounds me here from day to day!.
From a partner to a prisoner, please won’t you let this jail bird free!?
For the music I once sang turned to whispers in the trees!.

I’m sure that I am missed, soaring across the endless sky
And my friends across the oceans are surely waiting for my reply!.
I’m hungry for the berries used to nurture this old heart!.
For the sky that soothes all sorrows and the winds that soon depart!.

Be my pollen into honey and I will be your stream to sea
For the love that you are seeking I can’t give so easily!.!.
But I sit here in my Jail cell seeking light that’s passed the day
and i hear them all call out to me from so far away
be silent my sweet jail bird you’ll soon earn your wings again for the patience and the heart ache are all worth it in the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love this poem
your really good at writing!.
Your should write more and look into publishing!.
This was a very deep poem!.
Great JobWww@QuestionHome@Com