I need your input guys what is your opinion?

Question: I need your input guys what is your opinion!?

Creation verses an
Agression breeze
Windy a
Life so graceless

Lights jittery
A verticle twillight
Green April
Thrill

She lingers in my clutches
Our bare crotches caress in brief presses
The independence road
Crushes out our load

Then in stearing out in the question
She tears my eyes out
Her tears are shivers
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Very!.!.!.erotic!.!.!.

For the right guy then yes, I think it will work!.

Well done!

~ JamWww@QuestionHome@Com

it was better before!.!.!.now it is more confusing and your wonderful use of words now looks like a dictionary that threw up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com