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Of the people, for the people
Back with a vengeance
by Jellz (unpunct and proud)
Pomeo, oh pomeo
Wherefore art thou
Pomeo!?
Tis at least 2 days since you wrote
Are your eyes so sore!?
That you can scribe no more
Has the tyranny of time
Taken you away!?
For what shall become known
As a “Yahoo Day”
I lived by your presence
My unemployed fingers
Almost dying in your absence
…!.!.cried out for loss
Muse, arise afresh !
Slay with mortal wounds
Enemy of the people
(Boredom and disconnection)
May refound renewed vigour
Be yours, in solidarity!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Shakespeare is laughing in enjoyment of his verse turned round!. Well done and if meter is off, I can't find for it read well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It seems very old fashioned you have some points in there and there is also conflict with this "enemy' of some sort but all in all I enjoyed it 3!.5 stars out of 5!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Hi!",
Thank God yahoo's poetry page has kicked back into wack!.
As the Cyber space has not been the same without your martian
friends!. time ticks by too long!.
You done really well with this poem!.
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
hahahaha! Great Jellz!
your short 3 or 4 word sentences pack some pow!.
its fun to read for sure,
but i like to bounce up and down
on my chair!. hahaha!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It was a difficult day!. I have been clicking on avatars for lost poems!. Yesterday's poems show up there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
different to what i'm use to!. but i really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
tis a memory, methinks, of a day so foul!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOWWWWW!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.its differentWww@QuestionHome@Com