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Question: Do you get it!?
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sick of trying
everything i do is wrong
and though they always say
‘i will understand’
they end up hating me
anyway…
!.
!.
!.
This is what I once said!.
This is how I thought I felt!.
but this was only
the beginning!.
Angst ridden teen
sorry to say
my life is not
as bad as another’s!.

I only hope
that someone gets me,
How I am not always
depressed!.
How I do not try
and hurt…
Others
Myself
I am not harping just for
attention
I want attention…
but I can do without
I want love
and I have done without
I want…
not to want so much…
Can you understand
that I can’t stop feeling
responsible for all your pain!?!.!.!.
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!.
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a walk along eggshell shores
your hand in mine
my heart torn
bleeding feet
from all your standards
i dare not
defy…Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Jeez!.!.!.way to make us feel so bad!. No, I understand where you're coming from, am a little disturbed!. This is the most angsty thing I've seen from you in a while!. Listen, my dear, friends will always betray, always hurt, always walk away!. I have come to accept this, and I know it is hard, because you carry the eloquent burden of empathy and I do not, but in time you will learn to bear it!. I, however, will never turn my back or walk away from you, and I hope you know this because it is the song I sing with all my heart!. You know my e-mail, and my phone number, and my heart key!.

Love youWww@QuestionHome@Com

You see, I didn't think that it was about parents at all, unlike everyone else!.

I saw it as a kind of 'reaching' or something, it's hard to explain!. It's like your feelings with a friend or person you really like and you want to tell them and explain everything and sort things out but you can't!. Like you value their time and life they share with you!.!.!.

Is this at all what you were trying to convey!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was reading this poem, with both admiration and understanding, I thought!.!.!.!.until the last stanza when you tore out my heart!. It is so tragic, so poignant!. I have rarely read more powerful words, ever!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your parents dont believe you,
An amazing poem
i really liked it
:DWww@QuestionHome@Com

i get it, your parents don't understand you, it's just not originalWww@QuestionHome@Com