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Question: Would yu Rate my poem!?
The way u make me feel
Is a feeling I haven’t felt in a while
The way you look at me makes me brighter
When you hold me its something different
Makes me forget and hold you tighter!.
But am I ready
Can my heart really take the suspense!?
Every time you look at me
I wonder what it is you see
Could it really be me!?
You tell me everything I want to hear
Made me believe your love is true
What I did tell me now
Coz I don’t deserve one like you!.
Never thought one could make me smile like this
Not quite like you do
Must be an angel,
or a mere imagination
Wateva you are too good to be true!.
My friend
My man
All the things you possibly can
Do for me you helped me trust
Turned my pain all into dust
I wish fear was nowhere near
But its here, I know it’s clear
I thought by now would disappear
You hold a heart in the palm of your hands
One that has hurt so many times
A boy like you is hard to find
You really are one of a kind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Perfect 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

eh!.!.!.it isn't bad, but it's nothing too special either!.!.!.you tried too hard to rhyme, and so it doesn't really have a consistent scheme, but on the flip side, you did rhyme just about every word in there, and most make perfect sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

13/15

Now plz!. answer mine
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Really good just spell out everything!. 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it except for the text spelling!. Get rid of the "u's" and "whateva", etc!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com

YOU MUST OF WROTE THAT FOR SOME YOU LOVE !.!.!.!.ITS VERY DEEP AND GOOD I RATE A 10Www@QuestionHome@Com