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Question: Is this poem bad!?
How do I know when im ready
Ready to stop being me and take on a different phase
Maybe what u think is jus a stupid craze!?
Should I praise!?
What you say,
What you do,
Who are you!?
2 tell me what to do
When to do it
You say that you kno its time!.
Got me stuck up in a daze
Double thinkin this craze
Goin back and forth on what is right
Whats next
Maybe I jus might
Take on that different sight!.
And **** whats right
Or should I say wrong!.
Did u fool me!?
Was I fooled by the lies Behind Ur Smile!?
If I could jus drop the thought
And reconcile
The feelings I hide
Behind my strife
What the problem
With this life
How do u kno what to do
When you don’t know what to do
Haven’t got a clue
Should I choose you!?
Or lose
Coz im not ready to choose
It seems like Ur willing 2 wait
But wat if the wait is unbearable
Will you be able!?
To accept me 4 me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Its deep but its seems you were tryin to hard to rhyme!. but its goood gurlWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's alright!. My only advice would to work on the spelling errors!.

Typos such as "wat" instead of "what" can distract the reader from paying attention to the actual poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

man that poem was nice but i agree that you should watch out for spelling errors but otther than that it was nice : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's alright!.
Spell check though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it made my eyes bleed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its lovely!.!.!.!.!.i recommend u become a poetWww@QuestionHome@Com