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Squirrel caged
Enraged
At empty page
Laughing
Not with him

At the end of the string
A thing Dancing at the actions
Of others

Sometimes things just hit home even when we aren't aiming!.!.

Thanks DLWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Ok I get it now! Excellent; piece of work!. You are in the major league!. I am still in the minors!. Thanks for the insight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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its beautiful dunno wot the guy above is saying!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Taking up the challenge! (wink)

I watched her walk into the room,
shaking her *** like she owned the place!.
And the men, well they all saw her!.!.!.
for every eye was upon her!. As she
moved slowly cross the floor there
were whispers at every table!.!.!. where
there was La-no you could see
the envy curled up inside his snide
remarks!.!.!. and at the tables where
there were men!.!.!. well they were all
wondering if they'd be the one she
might give a little time tonight!. She
said hi to all with a voice that
crawls up inside you and puts erotic
desires crawling in your pants
and breathing all over you!. I never
once thought of her a princess,
but she sure had a way with words!.
To me!.!.!. being Rachael was special
enough!.

!.!.!.!. I wanted to do the "Knight in Shining Armor" thing!.
but that's just not my style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Pretentious p*sh!. My pet hamster writes better poems!. And he's been dead for 40 years!. You have been 'Ianoed'!.!.!.loser!.

I thought your 'poetry' WAS a fungal infection!. And Iano isn't stupid if it happens to be my name!. This from 'DragonLady'!?
Sure hope you don't live up to your name in the flesh!. (Scales!?)

Oh dear, there's old 'hydrop*sher getting his 2 cents in again!.
Go and get a wash, you dosser!.

The 2nd one isn't any better, despite being graced with my name!. Keep trying!.

You'd love to pick my brain!? You couldn't pick a better one!.!.!.but it would be nice if you could get one of your own!.

Sorry, Bob, but, as far as poetry goes!.!.!.you ain't got no style!.

About half as much thought as you took to say it in the first place!.!.!.2 seconds!.

Actually, Rachael is a nice name, but as you asked, let's have a bit of fun!. Give me 2 minutes or so!.

R is for rubbish, and that's just to start,
A is for aching, deep down in your heart!.
C is for crying, and that's what you do,
H is for hellish, your poems and you!.
A is for awful, your writing is 'mince',
E is for 'egad' - it sure makes me wince!.
L is for laughter, just what you evince!.

Bob M, that is seriously pervy!. Do the wardens know you're loose!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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