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Question: What does this say to u!?
in life we have doors, doors tha we close befor we open another!.
is my last door not closed!? i feel air and the pain i thought i left behind!.
should i have locked this powerful time door befor i opend my next!.
how do i find out why i steel have the past on my mind!.
i dont want to go back in time, for i will loose my present door if i do
i remember now!. the door was cracked when i chose to open my new door!.
i thought time woud close it for me!.
its not too late to close the door, or am i too late!.
the door will for ever bee open, and my heart will forver bleed from the door ive left open!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this either says to me that you were not ready to leave your passed life behind that you are regreting that you have passed that door and you thought you were ready to leave that one door to go to the other but you werent ready to leave your passed life behind or it could mean you moved on but you forgot something behind and the door was left open to remind you that you have left something behindWww@QuestionHome@Com
That perhaps your memories of the past are holding these doors open and keeping you from moving forward; and the reason may be that you are not ready to leave the nest yet!.
As far as the poetry -- this needs work!. Try not to use the word door so often!. Always use a spell checker before you post -- it gives your work more polish and keeps editors like me from telling you to run the darn thing!.
Keep working!.
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IT SAYS YOUR UNSURE OF A CHOICE AND SECOND GUESSING YOUR INITIAL INTUITION
YOU MOVED FORWARD TOO SOON!.!.!.!.!.YOUR TORN BETWEEN WHAT YOU CHOSE AND WHAT YOU HAD!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it says to me you must be in summer school for spellingWww@QuestionHome@Com