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Question: IVE PUT MY PAIN IN THE FORM OF A POEM, ITS NOTHING SPECIAL but is it ok!?
THE MOURNING AFTER

Do you walk beside me
Whilst i stroll alone
Through fields of pain
From seeds ive sewn

Do you kneel with me
Whilst i pray at night
To the one above
For a vision or sight

Do you cry with me
Whilst i silently weep
Tears of joy run shallow
From grief they run deep

Do you sit beside me
Whilst im deep in thought
Going back to my youth
And the values you taught

Are you with me listening
When i call to you
Tellng you what ive been thinking
What ive been going through

I know you are watching
I know you can hear
I can sense you around me
I know you are near!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poem is beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the title, consider it stolen!
It seems to be a very comforting poem, like you are giving yourself a cuddle!.
five questions, then you know all the answers!.
It feels like you are healing and accepting, I wish you well!. Terry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that's lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com