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Question: Read me poem!?
What do you think!? I know, it's weird, but it's how I write!.


Through the forest
Nestled in the shoulder of the hills
They are there
Peaceful and strange

We can't see them
But this race of people exists
They are there
Watching the ground

Unearthly times
Yet they still manage a form of peace
They are there
Wanna see them!?

Gentle people
The ones of the far away forests
Will not leave
They will stay home

They prefer love
Instead of a rancid form of hate
They are there
The gentle onesWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's somewhat strange because I'm not 100% sure who you are writing about!.!.!.

Ah--hold on!.!.I think I get it now!.!.!.the forest is the world!.!.!.these rare beings represent people in modern society that are not full of hate!.!.!.they are undistinguishable from the masses of people full of hatred and violence!.!.!.yet rare!. They're simply in peace with themselves and their surroundings!.!.!.so when you ask!.!.!."Wanna see them!?"!.!.!.your asking us whether we are the "gentle ones" or the ones full of hate!.!.!.something like that right!? Brilliant :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Simple,working on two layers yet maintained the flow,its like a whisper to a gentile awakening, a description of how U categorize people according to their humane/moral/peaceful conduct : gentleness!. I like it a lot !.!. plz write again !.!. give me a buzz when U do!. thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is brilliant! it gets me to think of what its referring to then surprises me with the answer being the mere "gentle people"
and asking us if we want to see them kind of gives us an opportunity to realize that its in all of us!. Very simple yet deep

"A poetry that could make changes"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!. it brings an awesome vision in my mind!.!. and it just opens my eyes how cool it would be to actually live in a gentle world!.!. today stuffs all messed up and crazy!.!. this poem is very relaxing, and even brings hope!. great work!

read my poem please!? =]
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I like your poem theme very much, yet needs some edit, and I
am not a master of that!. To many, "They are there" I give you a star, maybe others will read it, who are master editors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its not weaird it is just briliant!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

a gradedWww@QuestionHome@Com