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Question: Let's smoke one more, OK!?
Foggy
Fogey
Smokin' the stogey

As I view
Hue
And you

Wis-dumb
Founded
Well rounded

Off edges
He hedges
The bet

To get
A Head
Un-lead

But leading
Bleeding
Blue blood

Stains
Explained
Pain

Relieves
On eves
Of
Tomorrow

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wat the hell was that about!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

hydropro,

I don't know what's rolled up in that C-gar you're smokin', but mind if I have a toke!? My exhale!.!.!.

CIGAR (Smoke 'Em If You Got 'Em)
Foggy
Smokey
The old man's stogy

Smoker
Joker
Playin' poker

Puff like
A tuba
Havana
Cuba

Smoking pleasure
Leads to
Cancer

The box
Of El Productos
The Turkish blends
Of Cairo
Rolled into
A tight spiral
Aroma's
So delightful

Cherry blends
And Black & Milds,
It all depends on
What's your style!?

My uncle started young
His health has now succumbed
Spotted kidneys and black lung
Brown stained teeth
And absessed gums

Leaves and tobacco
Burn as one
Fathers welcome
Their newborn sons
Blue bloods smoke them
By the ton
Celebrating their
Enriched sums
Puff puff pass!.!.!.

My uncle was a heavy cigar smoker and us kids suffered when he was in the room!. We called him "dragon breath" and "death breath" and it was long before they made you smoke outside!.Your rendition was off kiltered and unmelonomic!. I don't associate smoking with hedging bets, wisdoms unfounded or eves of tomorrow!. Some of your prose was tasty and gritty enough though!.!.!. Grade D +Www@QuestionHome@Com

It doesn't have to reach our lips,
or penetrate our lungs,
the smoke and hue you talk about,
for some is always there!.

We need not strike a match,
flick a wheel or ignite
for some the Fog just thickens,
and is added to our plight!.

So next time you are thinking of
Yesterday's bygones,
Have the strength to douse it out,
And the courage to move on!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Smoking Poem:
People think smoking is cool
think again
because they are being a fool
as I will explain!.

Its bad for your health
but a person has a choice
buying smokes can affect your wealth
please think while one has a voice!.

Quit now before its too late
also once you start
do yourself a favor and don't wait
it can damage your heart

also when one smokes
over the years it can kill
plus they will constantly choke
and indeed they willWww@QuestionHome@Com

What a unique set-up and style! I've read it about 4 times and it pops out something different each time!. I love it!.
'un-lead but leading bleeding blue blood'
'stains explained pain relieves on eves of tomorrow'

beautiful phrasing and a most interesting structure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats really nice!.
your so creative, the pattern really interests me!.
amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey Hydro, you can sing this to Bob Dylan!. Very cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that'll leave a stainWww@QuestionHome@Com

that's kind of stagnant!. i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

i guess!.!.!.!.
if you feel better!.!.




whatever your question was!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com