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Question: What is the most fun your poems have ever had!?
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THE WHITE MARE


She’d been ridden bareback before,
I don’t know why she was so skittish with me…
She used a tree, a fence, a silo,
trying to rub me off!.

I pulled away the rest of her tack
and grabbed her by the mane,
She had never been
without bit and bridle before!.

As she started to warm up to the idea
we walked, then trotted, then galloped!.
Before I knew it, we were flying!.
I seemed to float over her back,
And she ran like the wind…

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True Story
Imperial Beach, CA, 1977Www@QuestionHome@Com


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My Uncle Al trained riders and horses for the Devon (PA) Horse shows!. He once placed me on a black Arabian stallion!. The experience of a lifetime!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can't even float in a bathtub and I have to ride to the mail box to get a letter!.!.!.!. this is way to much excitement for me!. It's been 4 hours now; I think I need to consult a physician !.!.Do I need to do that in this condition if I didn't take the pill!?

I can't post what I had the most fun with!.!.!. I'd be banned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I used to daydream of riding like that, across fields & meadows!. Unfortunately I was usually in school at the time!.
I would have loved to do it for real just once, but that time is long gone!.
I loved your poem, I could almost feel the freedom & the beauty of the moment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!"
So this what you call yourself in the middle of the night!. LOL : )

Either your on earlie or your on late!. because everyone is still on and it's 1PM in australia!. I would have thought all you guys would be asleep!.
Good afternoon to you all!

Loved the poem!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh my how I miss the feeling of a beautiful gallop, wind it my hair, the feel of the ride!The movement of the oneness feeling that comes with it! Memories--thanks for that!!
Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My first ex's uncle raised thoroughbreds!. One of his mares, Piccadilly Commando, allowed me to be present when she foaled!. It was an experience watching the baby grow and develop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Can you come pick me up please!? I never flew on a white mane before!.

Thats 178 Littlefalls Ave!.
Newark, NJ

Thanks I really need to go to the grocery store!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i have never ridden like that, but it sounds wonderful!. i could almost feel the wind in my hair!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Given free reign over ourselves, no telling how any of us might be in this life!. What a beautiful piece of poetry! I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa!.!.!.!.nothing like that, lol! Mine remain little jingles / limericks!.!.!.!.!.something I wrote once kinda went in that direction!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.after the first 100 pages, LOL!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good poem!. I like the way it starts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ur poemWww@QuestionHome@Com