Are you aware of the beauty of approaching night?

Question: Are you aware of the beauty of approaching night!?

Sun vanished like a lead sinker into the mountains!.
Hummers dashing, crowding around for their last drink of the day!.
Storm clouds multiplying rapidly in the north!.
Folks rushing around, bringing indoors chairs and tables!.
Silence settles, as a veil dropped, over this small town!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This is no ordinary stormy night!.!.!.sounds sultry!.!.!.kinda like the gently side of John Coltrane ;) Great imagery!.!.!.Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like how you can picture it!. and you have a really distinged style!. GOOD JOB!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!.!. very nice very nice!. I understood the meaning!. Good job! It was read easily!.!. and yeah :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful similes: sun like a lead sinker, silence as a veil dropped!. A visually pleasing poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

your description makes the approaching night realistic!. i liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!.!.I love the image of "as a veil dropped!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very visual-Thank you-A nice readWww@QuestionHome@Com

ver nice!. nice and peacefulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Enjoy the rain and Coltraine!. I am finishing a nice glass of cabernet myself!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beauty! I have been to this place before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem reminds me of August in NY!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My my quite the skilled poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

just enjoyed !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.couse maybe tomorrow never day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved how you put so much in so few words, you made a complete story here! Well written!! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com