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Question: Need poem help!?
ok this is what i got i dont know of i wanna add more or not


it is called no one knows
no one know's how much i love you
no one know's what you mean to me
no one know's how much you make me happy
and no one know's how good i feel
when we are together
no one know's what we have
and what we will always have
because are love is trueWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
to make it flow,
i think you should add something at the end that rhymes with TRUE
like!.

" without you i'd be blue "
" people should get a clue"
" everything is what i love about you "
" forever, me and you "


something like that,

OR
along the lines of your own thoughts!.


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its perfectWww@QuestionHome@Com

when its just me and youWww@QuestionHome@Com