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Question: I NEED SOME ONE TO HELP WITH A POEM!?
i need some one that can write poetr to help me out with a poem about!.!.!.!.
i met this guy at the loacl swimming pool 2 weeks ago and it was love at first sight me clicked right away
i just got out of a rough relationship cuz me and him would always fight over everything and nothing ever went right!.
weve been talking since that day and i want to make him mine the only problem is he has a girl friend
aslo can u mention that i like his sneaker game ( meaning i like his taste in shoes )Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I wrote this one, hope you like it, if not, sorry, just disregard!.
Waiting for Love
Hanging out at the pool,
I saw you baby, looking cool!.
I was feeling blue at the time,
Thinking maybe you could be mine!.
You are sweet , handsome, in the groove,
Making moves in great sneaker shoes!
When I saw you had a girlfriend,
My battered heart fractured again!.
We still talk, enjoy our time,
My fervent prayer: "I wish you were mine!"
Maybe one day this will be a fact,
With myself I'll make a pact!.
Show strength, courage, kindness and love,
Even if wanting to, not give your girlfriend a shove!
If love is to be, it can't be taken,
You must wait and hope for love to awaken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is one of the most oddball requests I have ever read in the poetry section here at yahoo before!. It kind of made me giggle!.
For you-
Two weeks ago
we meet at the pool!.
From the moment I saw you,
I knew you were cool!.
Your sneakers were tripping,
and body good looking,
you made me feel like a love struck fool!.
I know your with another gal,
and that we are only pals,
but maybe we could go out,
and see if things between us
would be better than what we share now!.
If you don't care to,
I won't dislike you!.
I would just really like to know
if your inerested in giving us a further go!.
*Chezzy ending!.
If I got this poem I'd laugh it up, but also take the request seriously!. I would probably tell a girl, if she gave me this,
let's see were time will take us!. I'm not one of those guys who skips out one girl for another, just because of looks, but poetry, that's tempation for me!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com