Another work in progress "The Rind" opinions please?

Question: Another work in progress "The Rind" opinions please!?

I promise I will leave you alone for while after this!.!.!.

"The Rind"

I saw in you
A sensational hue
A sweet explosion
Shadows skipping
So well rounded
Your dotted pattern
Ripe with content
I soon admired
Your thick skin-
Or so it seemed
Yet as you peeled
The outer layer
The truth revealed
Your bitter rind
The dancing strings
It was just a tease
Your excessive pulp
To much for me
-to stomach

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I like it!. Despite being able to know where the poem was leading very early on, this did not spoil the pleasure of the reading!. Very clever and amusing!.!.!.!.!.I've not been on line for a while, so haven't seen anything else of yours!.
I look forward to seeing more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOL That was great, very humorous ending, you have much talent and now seem versatile to boot! Thanks for sharing that one! Enjoy it!! Cheers!! Reminds me of the time went to see the male strippers!!
Love the title it couldn't be more perfect for your poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WE do not wish to be left alone!.!.!.or WE would not be here DL!.!.!.

Very "pithy" I tried to squeeze it for all it's worth!.!.!.And it was a plenty!.

P!.S!. I reposted "Is it against the rules" Hope you like it!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Out of the 3 poems I read of yours this one is my favorite, since I can relate to it!.

I love the humor at the end!. Great job!
This one gets a triple A++!

You really earn the title POET!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Orange tree in my back yard, just little green golf balls now!.!.!.but wait till Christmas!Www@QuestionHome@Com