Some people have asked me to write another poem so i have?

Question: Some people have asked me to write another poem so i have!?

wings

i have a freind
who makes life worth living
who gives me a torch in the darkest hour
like a bird she inspires me to spread my wings and try
i have a freind
who helps me fly
i have a freind who i can trust
like an angel he helps me evry step
i have a freind who helps me fly

(i am 13)
by kathleenWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I love your work! This piece is very interesting as I have 2 true friends, one female one male, therefore, I can relate!.

Take Care and Keep Writing!. !.!.!.!.!.StarWww@QuestionHome@Com

Obviously very personal and sounds like a great friend!. If you want to try to stretch your poetic wings restate this using metaphors!. Maybe you are the fledging bird who yearns to soar as your sister!. And she in turns urges and coaches you to take flight!.!.!.etc!. Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Pretty cool
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