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Question: Loves, Labours, Lost!.!.!.!.!.!.a poem, care to comment!?
Time for a mellow one!.
Extracted from my answer to another Poetry category question

Love, labours, lost – 3 feelings over time
by Jellz Fisher 080719

Happy
It’s incredible! What a wonderful day!
I would love to feel forever this way
Saying "I do" was the best thing ever
All I know now is I’ll love you forever

Angry
It’s unbelievable! What a horrendous day
I would love you to understand why I feel this way
Admitting I do may be the worst thing ever
All I know now is I can’t do THIS forever!

Sad
It’s inconsolable! What a heartbreaking day
I would love the chance to tell you please don’t go away
Saying goodbye, the most painful thing ever
All I know now is I’ve lost you foreverWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Dear HAS: Have you gotten your HAS under control now!? lol I like!. Liked the repetitiion of rhyme of each stanza!. You get a Happy face on this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

High with emotion, confusion plays a major part within the working, and it lends to the reader but doesn't block their understanding, well done, all in all a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Happy, angry, sad, Yet what is underneath!. Wish they would all go to a counselor!

Great poem, reality of life for so many!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done - love found, trouble brewing - then separation!. Well expressed in - really - few words ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

well i was thinking!.!.how it will be if 3 of this happen on the same day!.!.which one u will b remember most!.!.!.hmmm!.!.sure the sad!.!.!.n also the happy!.!.but anger!.!.we will frgt it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the way you play it out in three parts !. sounds goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like a confused person who because of said confusion lost very good poemWww@QuestionHome@Com